this was a story written by me 10 months ago!!! i thot i will share it here!!! its in malayalam but with english script :) the name of the story is "KOTHI"

                                  

                                       "KOTHI"

                                                                                                -Ajmal Benn

                 Thingalaazhachakal aarkkum angane priyam ullava agaarilla, annu “Tommy” enna Thommichan athayathu ee nyan, 5aam classil padichirunna kaalam, aniyan LKG iyilum,Schoolil padichirunna kaalam muthalkke ,ennum Sunday raathri kannadakyumbol, Monday raavile kannu thurakanamallo enna pediyundayirunnu enikku, ah pedikkipolum daivatheenam kondu oru kuravum vannitilla. Angane oru thingalaazhcha, samayam 8.15 am, nyan aannunarunnathu, raavile amma undakya beefinte manam adichaayirunnu, aduthu kidanna aniyaan “Mathew” enna Maathachan, schoolil pogaan madichu thala vedhana abhinayichu  kidappundu, praayam 4 eh undayirunnullu engilum Oscar abhinayam aayirunnu ella mondaysilum avan kaazhcha vechirunnathu.

                      Amma yundakunna beefinte manavum,ruchiyum athonnu vere thanne aanu, ellavarkkum avaravarude amma aanallo lokathe ettavum nalla cook, athu kondu thanne amma vellam choodakki athu kudichaalum parayum, ente amma undakunna chooduvellathinte athrem ninte ammede choodu vellam varillennu,pakshe ente karyathil angane allatto, chumma, ulla oru parachilalla entethu,ente amma undakunna beef fry whole class ah kaalathu world famous aayirunnu, ente aduthirunna “T.Raamamurthy” pattara, avanorikke ente amma undakya beef fry kazhichu control vittu avante ammede aduthu athinte ruchiye patti paranju kittya adiyude paadippolum undu avante valathe thudayude backil, annu, pattan maarellaam non veg kazhikyaan pattatha shaapam kittiyavara nennaayirunnu ente vicharam .

                        Urakkam unarnathum,nyan, beefinte manam adichu paathi mayakkathil adukalayilekku nadannethi,oru poocha kutty urakkam unarumbol kannu thurakaan shremikyunnathu pole nadanna vazhi neele nyan kannu thurakkaan shremichu,nadanilla, pakshe beefinte manam athenne nervazhiyil nadathi, adukalayil ethichu,avide ammayilla,nyanum stove in mel irunnu choodavunna beefum  mathram, samaanyam urayathilaanu stove vechirikunnathu, nyan annu dhe ithraye undarnnullu, engilum avidurunna oru stoolin mel valinju keri stovein mel vechirunna choodu beef kaanaan shremicha enne kanda amma ennodu:

“Da tommicha poyi kulichu orungikke samayam ethra aayinna?..evida ninte aniyan mathachan ??” oh avaninnum thala vedhana aayirikkyum!! 

                   Ennu paranjamma bedroomilekku mathachane eneeppikyaan poyi.Beefinte manam aswathikunnathinte idayil annu uchakkenikulla hindi class testinte karyam nyan marannu,aniyan mathachan annu classil poyilla,avante thala vedhana nyan karutheethu pole abhinayam aayirrunnilla avanu yethartha pani aayirunnu, uchakku lunchinu beef aanallo enna otta karanathinu nyan test enna risk  undayirunnittum schoolilekku pogaan  thirumaanichu.

              Bedroomil ninnum thirike adukalayil vanna amma kandathu, adukalayil stoolil mel ninnu diva swapanam kandu kondirikunna enne aayirunnu, ente adakkya kundiyil oru adiyum thannu bath roomilekku amma enne odichu, bathroomil kuli vegannayirunnu, kulikazhinjirangya ennodu lunch box eduthukondu varaan amma paranju, nyan bagill ninnum chottupaathram eduthu kondu vannu, kuli kazhinju turkeyum uduthu eeranode chottupathravumaayi nyan ammayude aduthethi,aniyan annu schoolilekilla enna vivaram appolaanu amma ennodu parayunnathu,athu kettathum ente santhoshathinu veedum aarogyam koodi, ithra nalloru thingalaazhchayo ? ennu nyan aalojichu poyi,kaaranam, amma annavanulla share beefum ennikyanulla chorinu mukhalil  vekyunnathu nyan kandu ,aah kaazhcha kaandaal undallo ente sirey vere onnum kaanan pattila, nyanum chorinte mellilulla ah beefum maathram,kothiyude nelli palakayum polichu anapotti naavilooriya ummineeru nyan engayo thirichirakki, ente nippu kandamma:

“Da tommicha nee innu schoolil ponille vegam poyi uniform idada”

                      Ennum paranju amma enne kannurutti kaanichu, Athu kandu pedicha nyan nere poyi uniformum ittu, tieum ketti hallilekku neengi, avide achan pathram vaayichiripundayirunnu, oru government udyogasthanum pothuprevarthaganum aayirunna achanu , pathram kyill kittyaal pinne bhoomi idinju pathalathil ethyaalum ah pathrathil ninnum kannedukilla, nyan avidirunna shoes ittu.  Dining tablelil appol amma breakfast eduthu vechu, samayam 9.00 aayi, uppu maavum pazhavum paalumaanu  breakfast athu kandathum ente mukhathe thejass mangi, baakhi ulla beef achanum ammakyum aayi maati vechirikukayaanu, nyan paathi manasode breakfast kazhichu paalum kudichu ,amma appol bagil chottupaathram eduthu vechu, nyan water bottleum kazhuthil ittu, bagum thukki veetil ninnirangi, ravilathe breakfast uppumaavum pazhathilum othukendi vanna dookham manasilundayirunnu,pakshe uchakulla ente lunch athu breakfast ente manasil undakya dukhathinte aayussu kurachu,nyan chiricha mukhavum aayi, school bus stopilekku nadannu,

                   Bus stopill, Ramamurthyum, Karthikum undayirunnu,pinne nyangalude colonyil puthuthaayi thamasikyaan vanna  Ammu chechiyum,nyangalude housing colonyile chettan maarude harammaayirunnu Ammu chechi,enteyum!!, Ammu chechi sundariyaayirunnu, Ammu chechikku kurachum koodi prayam kuravayirunnel enikkum nokkamayirunnunnu, ennenikku thoneetundu, chechi collegilekkaayirunnu, pala chettanmaarum pullikaariye kandukondu thanne stopinu ethir veshathu nila urappikyarundayirunnu,avarude ellarudem lakshyam ammu chechiyude manasilekulla vazhiyaayirunnu, ammu chechiye vaayi nokkikondirunna ennodu karthik.

Karthik: “Da nee testinu padicho?”

Nyan: “illada”

                          Karthik innale irunnu padichathonnum avante thalayil illa, hindi poem test aanu, avan avante oro vishamangal ente aduthu enni perukki, nyan athinonnum kaathu koduthilla ,Ammu chechiyil ninnum shredha thirinja ente manasil pinne uchakyulla  lunchu mathramaayi,ithinidayil  ente side ill ninna Raamamoorthy, police naaya manakunnathu pole mukham vechente aduthu vannoru chodhyam:

Ramamurthy: “da thomicha innu ninnakku beef alle??”

Ah chodhyam enne njettichu, daivame beefanennu nyan paranjaal avanu athu share cheyendi varumallo enna chindha apolente kunju manasil vannu:

Nyan paranju: “alla”

Thante nigamanam thetti ennarinja Ramamurthy vishama thode : “hmm” ennu mooli

              Nyangal moovarum bus kaakal thudarnnu, angane kurachu samayam kazhinjappol, ammu chechiye oru onakka chettan vannu bikeil ketti kondu poyi,pennungalude karyam ithraye ullu ennu, annu ente yilam manasennodu thanne paranju,nyangalude bus ethi,schoolil ethiya nyangal moovarum 5 A enna nyangalude classilekku neengi,benchil idam kandu,ente appurathum ippurathumayaanu karthikum,ramamoorthyum irunnirunnathu, nyangal schoolil etheethum mazha thudangi,mazha kaaranam nyangalude assembly principal vendennu vechu, angane ravile attendance vili aayi,ravile thanne nalla thannupundu nalla mazhayaanu, class muriyude dooru melle thurannu vanna oru thannutha kaattu ente bagil ninnum prevahichu kondirunna beefinte manam class muri engum vyapipichu, aduthirunna ramamoorthyude mukham veedum police nayayudethu pole aayi,avan ente nere nokkiyathum, pettennu ente number miss vilichu, nyan present paranju,athu kazhinju ramamoorthy ude number aanu, avan athu kettathum ente mukhathu ninnu shredha maati, class thudangi, nyangalude class teacher Mini miss, sundariyaanu, ammu chechi kazhinjaal ente manassu ilakkya adutha sthree ivaraanu,nyangalude class teacher Mini miss,ente maathram alla nyangal moonnuperudem, ennum ravile kandu ,kandaano entho ? angu istamaayi poyi, teacherinu nalla Manamaayirunnu aduthu varumbol, miss nyangale science aanu padipichirunnathu missinodulla istam kondu scienceinu nyangalkku moonu perkkum nalla markaayirunnu, annathe class ecosystem enna vishayathe patti aayirunnu, miss ecosystem, food cycleine patti class edukaan thudangi, class thakirthiyaayi nadannu, missinte mukhathu ninnum karthikum,ramamoorthyum kannedukaathe class shredhichirunnu, ,ente kannu pakshe black boardinu mukalil thookkiyitirunna clockin melaayirunnu, samayam 10 am aayathe ullu,ini lunch break aagaan 2 ara manikoor koodi venam, nyan clockill ninnum kanneduthu class shredhichappol ellam slow motionill nadakunnathaayi thonni ultra slow motion, missinte classum,kuttikalude responsum ellam ultra-slow motion, enthinu clock polum slow aakunathu pole thonni, angane  kuraye samayathe kaathiripinu shesham adhyathe period theernnu, randamathe classedu kaanulla sir vannitilla, athukondu, P.T sir vannelarodum groudill kalikyaan poykollan paranju, nyan pakshe vayaru vedhana anennu paranju class roomil thanne irunnu, P.T sir appo enne nokkaan ramamurthye avide ente koode iruthi, enikaake vishamam aayi, chottum paathrathil ninnum oru beef eduthu thinnaan aanu nyan avide vayaru vedhana abhinayichu kidannathu,Ramamurthy appol black boardil pala tharam color chalk vechu padam varachu kalikyaan thudangi, angane samayam 11 ayi,

                1^st interval ,nidhi kaakunna bhoothathe pole ente baginaduthu irunna nyan interval aayittum purathu poyilla,, enikkannu tiffin kodupokunna erpaadilayirunnu,pakshe aduthirunna karthik konduvarumaayirunnu, nutrilo theycha nalla bread toast, avanente nere neetti, nyan karthikinodu vendennu paranju, ithu medichathinte peril beef kodukendi vanaalo ennortharnnu ente ah move, angane interval kazhinju, pinneedulla nimishangal yugang-gal aayittanu enikku thonniyathu, valare nerathe kaathiripinu shesham 12.30 aayi.

                 Lunch break,ente mukham 100 voltinte bulb pole vettithilangu,appolekkum vishannu kudal karinjirunnu,annathe  12.30 bellinte sabhthathinu polum undarnnu oru beefinte manam , nyan bagill ninnum ente chottupaathram eduthu, athill ninum prevahichu kondirunna aah manam nyan aaswadhichu, appol Ramamurthy enne nokki,nyan avane nokki kalipichu

                                                        “enthada?” 

                         

                                          Ennu chodhichu,athu kettathum avan nottam maati, nyan ellavarudem koode poyi kyyum kazhugi, thirichu class muriyill ethi, ellavarum avaravarude chottupaathram thurakunnathinaayi nyan wait cheythu, aduthulla karthikinu chorum cheera thoranum aanu,rama murthy kaane ,thyru saadhavum, amma achane kaanikyunnathu kandu padicha ah pucha bhaavam,automatic aayi ente mukhathu vannu, kaaranam innathe ente lunch aareyum kothipikyunna onnanu, beefum chorum.

             Classile ellavarum kazhikyan thudangi,valare budhimutti aanu, karthiku kazhikunnathu , Ramamurthy pakshe lunch box thuranengilum kannu entethilaanu, nyan beef aano konduvannirikunnathu enna avante samshyam maarreetilla, avante nottam pakshe nyan koottakeela, deskill viricha kerchiefinu mukalil prethishtticha ente chottupaathram thurakaan nyan ky neetti, chuttum ellavarum food kazhichu kondirikayaanu ,pakshe ente manasil ippol nyanum ente chottupaathram mathrame ullu,sidill thyru saadham kazhichu kondu Ramamurthy nokkunundu, athonnum pakshe ah samayam ente manasil odeela, nyan ente nakham upayogichu chottupaathram thurakaan shremichu thurakunilla,100 volt bulbinte prakashasham undayirunna ente mukhathu voltage fluctuation pole bhaavam maari maranju, prakaasham kuranju, Nyan veedum shremmam thudarnnu thurakunnilla,veedum aanju shremichu enni ttum oranakkavumilla, nyan shremam thudarnnu konde irunnu, e samayam classilulla kuttikal kazhichu theerarayi,Karthikum ,Ramamurthyum kazhicheneettu, athonnum ente shredhayil pettilla avasaanam aah bageeradha prayathnathinte end ill nyan ah chottupaathram thurannu,appol evide ninno oru shabdham “students close your books”, athe ah chottupaathram thurakaan shremikyunnathinte idayil nyan samayam poyatharinjilla, hindi missinte sambhdham aayirunnu athu, ah shabdham kettu ambharannu kyil thuranna chottupaathravum pidichirunna enne kandu miss, 

                                                “da thommicha” 

                                    Ennalari aah alarchayil enikkundaya njettalinte akhathathil kyil ninnum slip aaya  ente ah chottupaathram nilam pathichu, kooode athilundayirunna chorum beefum ente manasile kothiyum.

The end!!